Fredrick Douglass reaction:]]

Well i guess i suck at writing according to you:]. In my comments it says i am difficult to understand, and it makes it had to follow my argument. My thesis statement was OK. I guess i need help. Anyways i get really confused on the essays i have to write for this class. I also thought the reference thing was right i guess not. I also need help with my capitalization's and proper nouns. So hopefully i write better next time:].